Tā de wénzhāng xiě de tài huìsè le, dúzhě hěn nán zhuāzhù zhòngdiǎn.
His article is written too obscurely; readers have a hard time grasping the main point.
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晦 means 'dark/gloomy' (as in a moonless night) and 涩 means 'rough/astringent.' Something 晦涩 is as hard to penetrate as darkness, and as rough to swallow as something astringent.